We discussed this piece in the concept department and have a little feedback for you. The reason I am sending this is because I know how it feels when you post stuff and get no response and how important is to get sincere feedback, not the "awesome stuff" kind. And because you deserve it. So, first of all, congrats on how you painted the character. Next, the ticket, or whatever the character is holding is foreign to the rest of the painting (color) and too obtrusive. Then, the sun is a bit gratuitous and does not match the lighting on the character (wrong side). You could just get rid of it altogether. The composition is a bit too symmetrical; especially the mountains in the back (too tall, btw) are contributing to the impression. Anyways, your work is phenomenal; please keep at it!
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Thanks har, Ken. T^T
We discussed this piece in the concept department and have a little feedback for you. The reason I am sending this is because I know how it feels when you post stuff and get no response and how important is to get sincere feedback, not the "awesome stuff" kind. And because you deserve it. So, first of all, congrats on how you painted the character. Next, the ticket, or whatever the character is holding is foreign to the rest of the painting (color) and too obtrusive. Then, the sun is a bit gratuitous and does not match the lighting on the character (wrong side). You could just get rid of it altogether. The composition is a bit too symmetrical; especially the mountains in the back (too tall, btw) are contributing to the impression. Anyways, your work is phenomenal; please keep at it!
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